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My little mushroom
来源:本站原创 作者:王钰雪 发布日期:2020-12-07 10:11:31

Last Monday, our teacher gave us some mushroom. My mushroom was very small. It was gray and it looked very cute. When I watered it on Wednesday, I found that it had grown up a lot. On Thursday, it was getting bigger, it looked like a little tree!On Friday, it multiplied some small mushroom. My teacher told me I could take the biggest home to cook it. So I picked it carefully and took it home. My mother made mushroom soup, it was really delicious!
 

No watering for two days after picking. Till now, my mushroom didn’t sprout again. I’m so sad. I hope it will grow up soon.
 

点评:这篇习作“我的小蘑菇”是按照时间顺序来记叙蘑菇的生长过程,描述非常有条理,行文舒展自如,一般过去时态和一般现在时态运用得当,体现了小作者扎实的英语功底。只要我们平时注意观察,用心感受,一定可以写出好的英语作文哦!
 

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